A normal room for a 13 year old. Everything has its place but sometimes they don't stay in their place. 4+. Over all it was still one of your best work. In the winter it reaches below at night the chimney is struggling to heat the room. Decorations fill the room with topics, happiness, colours and hobbies. I have boxes for my bits and bobs, they are blue, pink and purple. . We cannot afford to heat our house in the winter. The layout of the room has a facing direction pointing at the north east with side on single beds one near the huge closets and one across near the sliding windows for the sun to enter. eg Self fun. In my room there can sometimes be a lot of space when my room is clean but when it is untidy there is literally not space because of the stuff on the floor. Your writing paints a picture in the readers mind and leaves them feeling like they actually just physically walked around it! Needs work on the punctuation. I roll around on it and it feels great. You had a lot of good ideas. My accessories, make my room the way it is. I have a black bed side table that is woodin and I have a plastic clock, then I have a grey alarm clock that I really dislike because it wakes me up and I don't like getting up. Cleanliness is key for a happy mum. make sure it's extra creamy!! The reader doesn't know what you mean, but overall its very good. When I look walk inside my bedroom and look out the window I see the big pine trees blowing swiftly in the wind and the bed just waiting to be made since yesterday. Sometimes when it's really cold i'll have my soft red blanket as well. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. I spend probably 12 hours a day on my bed so it needs to be nice and comfy luckily it is. 10 metaphors to describe a place. Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. I like how you described your mum telling you to clean your room all the time haha. My bedroom. My pictures, my belongings, my personal space. I look up at the ceiling and see a spider in the corner. The lamp rests on a stack of six books that are all ever so slightly faded because of the direct sunlight that streams in all day long through the window. I am going to take you on a mental journey around my bedroom. By Bridget Smith. Under my bed is my large curved desk that has been bolted to the ladder, and then my tiny wardrobe which I can barely fit all my clothes into. DVD, TV) and add comas in some places. As you walk into my room you may notice the bright colours. You had very descriptive vocabulary and there was a lot of adjectives and that made it very interesting. Beneath the mountain is a variety of my calves running in the evening sun. I would give you a 3+, Great bit of writing and very accurate on what Angus's room looks and smells like. The furniture is a nice light brown. They also allow a lot of sunshine to come in, no matter what the season. The walls of my room are not too interesting at the moment, as they are covered in a bright white wall paper sealer ready for my new paint colours of white and teal blue. A cool breeze drifts in from an open door or window. I wandered towards my bedroom put my hand on the chilled silver handle. William I liked your descriptive words and the structure of your paragraphs. The best part of my room is the furniture and layout. Yes you do have a warm a cozy bed which I struggle to get you out of in the mornings lol. My duvet is new as I got it when we moved house. Still have questions? When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. Petas Bedroom Here, were creating a metaphor by saying a person is our home. The colour. make sure it's extra creamy!!! You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. Lastly the furniture, I have three desks I don't know why, but I do. The cleanliness of my room is not so good. But with all that there are some amazing bonuses like awesome modern day accessories and how amazingly clean it is! I noticed that most of your words you could spell right. On my desk is my blue lamp, my pink polaroid camera and my mini drawers. R4. I almost feel bad for the things that have slided down the back and not found until the layout of my room changes. My room is big and there is lots of space to do fun activities like board games and flips. The second style of my room is boys simply because its a boys only room for me and Jackson to share. I also have two Japanese swords in my room and one of them are a full size katana and makes my room feel like i'm safe if anyone tries to break in. As I creep through the messiness there begins a pile of lego pieces on the grey dull carpet waiting for someone to stand on it and be be pricked. Next time you could have more ideas because the paragraphs were a little short. 6. as noisy as the market. Great bedroom description Shadyn, I loved how you punctuated your sentences and it made it easy to read, you also have a good use of grammar. You walk into my room and pop! My room is basically covered in sports equipment. Im proud to call the bedroom mine but im going to change it sometime in the future. Antenna Tv Buffalo, When I walk into my bedroom, it instantly feels as though I am in my own, private space. This is why my bedroom is the best place in the house. I have modern tropical theme with orange and blue striped sheets with a blue duva. The movie is about a family trying to save their home (their castle) from developers who are trying to forcibly take it off them. Most of the punctuation was good but there were a few mistakes like writing the word twice. Well my room is very messy I hate tidying my room I alway have clothes all over the floor. The theme begins with a deep sea green feature wall on the right hand wall. Some of your words are a little bit repeated. Have you ever walked into someones living room and its felt like you walked into a move theater? Under the small window is my bed and to the left of the bed is my small bedside table with my grey shaded lamp on top. I love my bed to bits (literally my cats rip it to pieces) My most special thing in my bedroom is my glowing dragon it isnt very big but it lights up at night time and gives a bright glow of rainbow colors. Feels very hot. My room is not the most spectacular, but it is the one place that I can call my own. The colouring is a dark grey frame with translucent drawers. Above my desk there is my mini basketball hoop with my mini basketball in it. your paragraphs were formed well. I think you edited the grammar well with making it make sense but there were a few spelling mistakes and no capitals for I The best part about having a themed bedroom is that it makes me more relaxed when I come home from a long day at school. My bedroom is the second largest bedroom in my house, and in this description writing I will describe to you about my bedroom by my accessories, layout/space, color and furniture so here we go. I liked some of the words you used like; zooming, convenient and belongings. Honestly, its like DCs villain Two-Face; the fact on whether its tidy or messy is based of luck, like the flip of a coin. Then a little bit more right you will see a king size bed with a star wars duvay cover and black pillows. But there is always room for throwing down pillows as a carpet you will never know unless you try. It may be the view of the mountain you see out my window or maybe the blue colour scheme or maybe even all the photographs on my crisp white walls. My bedroom (extended metaphor) My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the undergroath. I think that the things in my room represent me and my interests. 3+. My books are bright and colourful so they stand out, all of them are different colours. That is exactly what it looks like. Also I have bad eyesight so It Is really hard to see my tv from my bed. it has a touch of my personality, and stays clean most of the time. My bedroom, my bedroom is like my very own house all to me, no-one is allowed in without permission except the cat and dog (mainly the cat). People who work from home might have a big computer setup with large monitors, webcams, and microphones. The ideas are great and relevant to the topic. Well done!!! It looks good with all the light colours fitted into my room, and with the dark blankets covering my bed. The second one is abstract art that I made about a year ago when I was bored, and the third one is a tree with a swing, I made it when I was year 6 and I entered it into the amp show and I got 2nd. Its got a squishy top. Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! Im proud to call it mine. My room is the best room in my house I think this because of the warmth and the softness in it, (mostly my bed) I would like to give you a tour about my queen size bed. My curtains are dark blue so if a have a sleep in the day it seems like it's night. When I left my room I had my pajamas on the floor with my beanbag in the middle of the room. You have accurately described the chaos that is your room - however you didn't mention how many times a week I ask you and your brother to tidy the mess up! But some of the stuff in my room is going to sold so I can make more space. When you walk into my room you can tell it is mine because my name is on my wardrobe door and my room is the only room in the house that has a blue wall. My wardrobe is a double sliding door with a grey color. Your punctuation was good. There isn't really a theme to it. I like the vocabulary you used to describe your story like vibrant, large, silk, chilled. There is clothes such as shirts and shorts mixed in with stuffed toys and shoes. Now you should have a pretty good idea of what my bedroom looks like. It's unique to me and cosy for my cat it's one of my favourite rooms in the house and has all the colours that I think fits me. Its a room I am proud to call my own. All my clothes and shoes are hidden away in the wardrobe so you dont have to see them. I opened the door, it creaked and made a sound like someone's fingers on a chalk board. The dark side. Overall it's ok but you repeat your facts. My room is VERY messy. Another piece of furniture I haven't yet mentioned is my bookshelf. cock is life. It's like a prison for books and random junk, and you never see it again until you decide to move your room around, which for me is usually every 3 years or so. There are lots of accessories in the room. There are loads of different earrings dangling off of a metal sheet, which is shaped into a dog. No need to be fancy, just an overview. It is a stationary calamity! It is dominated by rubbish, food plates, cups and dirty clothes. Use the planning sheet in your English book and the list of NOUNS and ADJECTIVES to assist you. The reason why my room is my room is because the wallpaper, the wallpaper is nicely placed in cool spots. This is a good peace of writing. I like the fact that all your ideas were relevant and made sense to the topic. My room also has a bit of a natural vibe as there are a far few plants around room. I think my bedroom is amazing but still has a bit of work to be done on it for it to be a masterpiece! But I don't even know why the window is there in the first place! My light shade is a bright red with white flowers scattered over it. You would see all my clothes on my floor if you walked up stairs and all the undies on the floor could date back a month. One of the styles of my bedroom is wood because most of the room is made of it and it looks really cool too. I love the furniture in my room it makes it feel as if I am in a dream. Virgo Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility, Taurus Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility, Scorpio Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility. Somehow it is always warm with the right temperature. It feels warm in the morning because of the natural light that comes streaming in and in the afternoon it feels cold caused by the sun moving to the other side of the house. Your mother might say this if they come home and see that youve left all your toys lying out. My room is very minimalistic because of the black and white design. What storms then shook the ocean of my sleep. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) I also have surfing posters around the room of surfers that I admire and aspire to be like someday. I use my bedroom to sleep, relax and sometimes do my homework. Some names needed capitals. My walls are light blue and my ceiling is white. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. You used good description and your story was interesting. Well in my bedroom I have blue and white walls. My tiny wardrobe has been painted the same colour as my wall apart from the handles and legs which i think looks pretty cool, and my desk is covered with random bits of paper and a couple of monitors. Their curtains black out light, their chairs all face the television, theres surround sound speakers, and of course theres an enormous flat screen TV on the wall! Good description of your room Peta. Well done Emma I could really picture your bedroom well use of spelling and I like the words you have used. But overall my bedroom is to me one of the best bedrooms in the house. Definitely need to work on your vocabulary and sentences as it seems to be repetitive. My room has a very light colour theme, these colours include snowy white, shades of my favourite colour blue and hints of midnight black. Soft light brown that's how I describe my carpet it is really soft to walk on and gives you that welcome feeling. The next thing your eyes are drawn to is the cluttered, varnished oak shelf in the back left corner of my room. Brothers Of A Feather Driving Wheel Lyrics, Firstly, the furniture. The bedroom is a place of solitude, a place to just relax, I spend most of my time either sleeping or reading and the rest of the time is for cleaning, it's not the fanciest but it's mine. The darkness at specific times, so as I said it can get dark fast, I have to use my lighting module just to make it look like its still daylight, it gets annoying sometimes, you just got home and you go in your room and you cant find the light (By the way my hallway light is a sensor light). You have had a few rooms in your life and you know how to to make yourself feel at home easily. The laws don't apply to my imagination except for the time to clean your room law. Very good description i could imagine i'm there.Very good punctuation. I think your writing has really improved this year. I have a wooden modern looking bed side table where I put my trophies and books. Check your spelling and punctuation. Good work I don't think you need to improve. The style of my room is a beach theme. It has a big messy double bed thats cosy and warm with lots of different rugs on the floor. My bedroom is located at the back of my house halfway down the hall. My golly gosh it's apigsty Ill be honest its like a pig lives in their. The story behind this is that ogres are usually thought of as being dirty, smelly, and unkept. So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. Ano ang Imahinasyong guhit na naghahati sa daigdig sa magkaibang araw? In my room I have fairy lights these are to brighten the room up at night. I move things around to make it look tidy. I don't know how they got there. Then, you were talking about how the home had turned into a place of work. Secondly, the wall decorations. THOMASS BEDROOM At the bottom of the bed I have a bright red cover I keep it there just in case there's a cold night so if there is I can pull it over my bed for more warmth. So in conclusion I think my bedroom has a good layout, colors, furniture and style and I like it a lot and so does Jackson. Next, the dampness, if you accidentally leave something on the ground its automatically soaked, well at least when you leave a cup out you have something to drink in the morning. But i think I saw some spelling mistakes. The cloths on the large draws with the big mirror really need to be tidied up and put away properly then there is the pile of bags that have my ski gear and cricket bag the big bags could deffently be tidyed up and put in the garag. The cast on Describes it well. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM I have a lot of special objects in my bedroom. Bent u genteresseerd neem gerust contact met ons op. Although this also gets used by my sister who also 3, Ha ha he was very honest about how messy his room is, it was an accurate description. Then where you enter my bedroom behind the door there is my Hockey gear, Swimming bag and my School bag. Very well written. There are ups and downs but it is where I feel safe and calm. Now my layout I don't really like my layout but it's ok I guess but it can be better the reason I don't like it is my bed is too far away from my tv. I thought you could have added more adjectives to describe the objects you talked about (such as the Lego and drums) but I loved how you used words such as wade instead of walk, avalanche instead of fall and navigate instead of look/travel. Overall, well done Teatukura! Sometimes you cant hear anything because Im sleeping or the sound on my ipod is turned off. You could be mistaken for being in a movie theater. Next time your could probably add some more descriptive words, not saying that there was not any but just add some more in like more bigger descriptive words. There is also a big built in wardrobe which has heaps of space in it ( where I chuck all my stuff in). My turquoise blanket has a delicate touch, so fluffy you want to take it everywhere. My bedroom isn't that big so storage isn't easy for all of the clutter I have. My room does not have a lot of furniture in it but the favorite part of my room does and that is my desk it has two skinny shelves next to it. Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. My duvet has many colours and matches everything in my room, including my bright pink beanbag. Bed, Desk Drawers and bean bag are most of the furniture in the room, the double bed's too big for the room the there is the desk the desk is big wooden and has my docking station and all of my accessories on it, then there is the beanbag the bean bag is lodged in between he bed and the desk it doesn't get used much i only really put my school bag on it but i still think that it's a cool thing to have in the room. in order to create the perfect metaphor to describe your home. my clothes. It might not be your typical 13 year old bedroom because it's a spare room. You might walk in and say, Why is my home a Christmas tree? Well Done Jakey Muss x. KADENS BEDROOM The material on this site can not be reproduced, distributed, transmitted, cached or otherwise used, except with prior written permission of Multiply. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. The place I can get away from my sister and other hassles, a place where I have some good things, my bedroom. I use them both for school work (homework) or for other needs. Jamies Bedroom Description. Overall I think my bedroom is nice and comfy, and I like it the way it is. David Silverman Simpsons Net Worth, But most of the time, me and Sam are in different moods. My bedroom is just the way I like it. My Bedroom They are all my floor and desks. My bed is NEVER made properly, (unless mum makes it for me.) Im honestly surprised that its still hanging on to the wall and not falling, judging by all the weight its carrying. The mirror is directly in line with my bed so it was scary when I had just watched a horror movie about the urban legend Bloody Mary and had to go to sleep. In the corner on one side there is a small mirror and above it a poster of my name, that reminds me who I am everyday when I see it. I enjoy spending my own time just lying on my bed listening to music. I like her use of descriptive words and the slight humour. In the corner by my door is my double bed, in the other is my desk and stool. It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. I have a table in my room strewn with fly tying equipment and materials, it shows that I like fishing. My bedroom is the room straight ahead of the hallway it has the great things that most bedrooms have a theme, colors, bed and a carpet and those are the four topics I will tell you about. But good over all, Shadyn this is an accurate explanation of your teenage boy's bedroom. Your story was good. I have always enjoyed my bedroom as describes the character of me, as it being a part of my life, it describes the aspects of what I like such as colours, patterns, decoration and the bedroom layout. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! I made my bedroom the way I wanted it and set it up the way I liked it. On the left behind the wall, you can see a lot of lego and a few book and also a bean bag. If you are 13 years old when were you born? She has described most of the furnishings. I run to my room, upstairs on the left i jump onto my bed yes schools over I think to myself. You had lots of adjectives to back up your nouns. The rooms style of the room is old rugged modern and not really cared about but that's what makes it mine. List of Metaphors for Home. My wardrobe the mirror is all dusty with had prints all over it and inside it has rubbish, all my rugby gear, ski gear and more clothes. I didn't notice any capital mistakes throughout your writing. My floor isnt actually that colorful but because there are heaps of clothes everywhere you cant tell how boring colour is. I have a small sized mat black H stuck to my wall with a pattern of turquoise and white dots and black and white dot bunting underneath. There is also a tall boy and an inbuilt wardrobe where I keep all of my shirts for school. My blinds are a creamy, white colour that go all the way to the floor. No i have to go and clean up my room. In my bedroom standing in the doorway looking at it. What I would really like though is some more storage because there is not a lot of space to put my belongings. What is the rising action of faith love and dr lazaro? I love my room because it's mine. The bit that gets me, is how can one person be so messy?! No faults with your spelling. Your mother or father might have taught you a lot of dishes to cook or given you a lot of games to play to help your brain. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. sleeps in my room. To your left is a white table for doing homework on. Due to the architectural design of my house, my rooms windows receive little to no sun, excluding the few hours of late afternoon to sundown. This is to say that one person (your mother, father, wife, husband) is the person who makes you feel most comfortable and relaxed. Overall, I am very happy with my room and love the colour scheme that I have. Is your bedroom like mine dirty and smelly. But quite a fun place to fool around. So, you can use this metaphor! My room has two windows, one facing south, the other west. As Ive already said I have a painting of Clifton Beach hanging above my bed, it is landscape and the colours combinations are awesome. The most famous poetic metaphor for love, which we find in Shakespeare, also involves heat. -3, Brody, I like your writing. You described thing very well. 4. you have used lots of good descriptive word and you spelling is good as well. How my room feels. So, if you referred to your home as a retreat, you would be saying that your home is a peaceful place to escape from the world belong. Whether it be the theme, the walls, the layout or just your favorite item in it. e.g, the size of your bed, and the colours of your bed covers. The bright stuff in my room are mainly the walls, desk and drawers, my room gets a lot brighter when I open the curtains because my windows are a basically a wall itself, but with a window that big everything ends up being brighter during the day and night in the summer which is a problem (even with the curtains pulled). If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. To say your home is a safety blanket is to relate it to the characteristics of safety blankets: they make you feel comforted, safe, and protected from the world. 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